sorry for my wall of text, i came to fap and instead wrote an essay XD
NTH ideas for later:
you can add a on hover or click easter-egg on your title screen like PvZ flowers,
and a parallax of the clouds moving.
some secondary movement can help make the world feel more immersive, you probably dont have time to do this everywhere but on the title screen can make a good first impression ^-^
would be a little less misleading if the web link was the patreon logo, maybe you intend to change this later if you plan on adding web browsing for the narrative
some QOL habits to adopt would be starting the dialogue box instead of waiting for the player to click again if its the only action, i think the extra click is required after your told to click on things
outdoors your inventory UI "x" to close the backback is barely visible, might want to add a white border since its a dark X allowing it to be visible on everything
I liked the cinematic intro, and the dream state for some foreplay was well done ^-^
however the prologue at the window is very static, maybe have it scroll very slowly past the photos with the text, not ideal to have the first 30 seconds be static and a wall of text literally ^ ^;
Def a great vibe based on all the charcaters, also idk why but i have a feeling you might want to use time to represent the cycles of the day, theres so many planned activities and you might want to get granular. just a feeling
you're doing great ^_~